Descriptive Writing Assignment

One of metaphors I really liked that i used was "like Ice cubes in a freezer..."
The reason why i chose this was because i thought it was very detailed in such small words. It was like you cold feel was it was trying to get out to you. Cold, lonely, nobody but the fog itself.


Dylan's Blog:
Dylan, i thought this was a well thought out paragraph. I really liked the way you used the sound of the clock and when it goes off. As well as the sound in the back of your head was genuis. Nice paragraph.

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Kevin's Blog:
Nice, Kevin. This was a very good paragraph. I really liked the way you used sounds for senses in this paragraph. Helps the reader get a "sense" of what's going on. Keep it Up!