TUE 4/17- Helpful Blog Comments

Review the comments that classmates have made on your blog and choose two or three of them that you found particularly helpful.

This one was from Kit,

Daniel,

I agree with most of what you said. I think that happiness is something diffrent for each person, and what brings me happiness, me being a relitively just person, will not be the same that brings a murderer happiness, someone who is, it could be argued, unjust.

I sont agree with what you said about said about Socrates. I dont think that Socrates would have said that rules were meant to be broken, I think that Socrates beleived in MOST rules, just not all of them.

Over all, good job!
Kit

I believe that kit wrote a great comment because she provided suggestions for the content. I'm not to sure how this is helpful but know that she agrees with me makes me feel smarter and also the second paragraph she is disagreeing with me which is good because i can see her point of view. Also some helpful things to keep in mind

Written By Austin Han:

I like this piece, because it is really good that you described what you don't like and why. but,i think that the piece could be longer, what made you think that way about people. Did anything before happen to you?

I think that this piece was really good because Austin is asking questions about why does this make me so mad. I think that's is a good question because it might make that paragraph more sense and i probably should have already have that in there. Also he ask me if this really happened to be. It might have been good to relate to what i was writing.

That's It!